Zach drawing a banana-
The genre of this text is a conversation. The transcript has
a formal register; it is a conversation between Zach and his parents. The mode of
the text is spoken; it is a spontaneous and interactional conversation. The
purpose of the transcript is to discuss, Zach is speaking about his day and his
surroundings such as his ‘little pad’ and drawing a banana.
Within the transcript, his mother uses a lot of
interrogatives. This may be because of the contextual factor, his age. Zach is
two years old which means he is at his two word utterance stage, going onto the
telegraphic stage. His mother uses interrogatives which lead to adjacency
pairs. His mother also uses interrogatives to ask Zach to elaborate his speech
such as ‘for the banana (.) what can the banana have (.) its three things (.)
what are they?’ Zach had stated that a banana, has three things and his mother
is asking him to go in to detail with his speech to challenge him to use more
language such as adjectives. At Zach’s stage he will usually know more than 200
words. He has proved he knows nouns, such as his local topics like banana,
biscuits, his 'little pad'. He also shows he is new to adjectives 'little pad'
and 'because its too small'. He hasn't used many adjectives which may be
because he had recently been introduced to them and has started recognising
factors about nouns such as the size of objects.
Zach’s mother echoes him when he uses overgeneralistion,
‘skins’, in conversation. ‘and here’s the skins’ ‘oh (.) are the are the skins
off are they?’ Zach is at a young age, he is at the telegraphic stage so he is
familiar with nouns such as ‘skin’ but may not know the difference between it
being plural or not. His mother may echoe him to give him confidence whilst
learning speech rather than confusing him by modelling what he had said in a
non standard form.
Chomsky has a theory about language acquisition, 1960’s. He
believes that every child is born with a language acquisition device which
enables them to learn and produce language because it is a natural mental
ability. He believes that LAD converts the major principles of a language and
it’s grammatical structures into the child’s brain. Children then learn
different vocabulary and relate the syntactic structures from LAD to form
different sentences. He believes that children cannot learn language by
imitation alone because adults use irregular language in general conversation.
Adult’s speech can be broken up and sometimes ungrammatical. Zach using ‘skins’
backs up Chomsky’s theory as in the environment; he would have heard his mother
say ‘skin’ instead of ‘skins’ which shows that not everything is imitated.
However, Zach may of heard his mum pluralising words such as ‘cows’ and he may
have picked up on it and is applying it to other words. There is evidence to support Chomsky’s theory
such as when children are learning language, it is unusual for them to get
there subjects, objects and words in the incorrect order. Also when they use
overgeneralization such as ‘I drawed’, instead of ‘i drew’ show that it can’t
be just imitation that allows them to learn language. There is evidence against
Chomsky’s theory such as language can be learnt from interactions with other
people (Bruner).
Build a robot- Zach and his mum-
The genre of this text is a conversation. It has an informal
register as it has non standard use of language such as ‘doo doo doo dooo’
which is said by Zach. The audience of this transcript is Zach and Halla as
they are having a conversation. The mode of the text is spoken. It is a
dialogue which is spontaneous. The
purpose of this text is to discuss the project of building a robot which is the
subject of the transcript.
Throughout the transcript, Zach pauses a great amount within
his sentences. He is not very fluent. This may be because he is focused on
what he is doing physically, building his robot. He is also ill which may
affect his speech. ‘We don’t need breakfast (.) it’s gonna take a little time
now (2) cos it went wrong before (.) now we (.) then it healed and now (.) it
will take a little time (.) for the robot to heal again (2). Because of his age
he may need to think more about what he is saying, meaning it takes him longer
to get his words out, rather than if he was older and more experienced, he
would be more familiar with new words. Zach uses adjectives in his speech such
as ‘lots’ of sellotape, ‘long’ bit. Zach may have recently become familiar with
adjectives because of his age, meaning his speech is broadening. Zach uses many
declaratives, in response to his mum’s interrogatives. He also uses an
exclamative ‘Tadah!’ which shows that from 13 months onwards, his speech has
developed significantly.
Throughout the first conversation, Zach brings up the topic
of the robot, but his mum, Halla, sets the agenda by asking him interrogatives,
which leads to adjacency pairs of Zach responding. In the second half, Zach is
setting the agenda as he is dominating the conversation. He is saying to his
mum that they have to wait rather than get breakfast. ‘Yeah (.) it’s gonna be a
long time though (.) but we’re not gonna have breakfast still’. This supports
Zimmerman’s and West’s theory, the Dominance model, that men dominates the
conversation over women. It also contradicts the theory as Zach does not
interrupt his mum, the theory claims that men interrupt more than women. He
uses a declarative to tell his mum what they are going to do, rather than
asking her.
Some good points - you are looking at interesting aspects of the data.
ReplyDeleteWork on integrating everything - at the moment, I can see where you have used GRAMPS then given each idea its own paragraph. To improve, these aspects have to be connected e.g. POINT: who uses what language to what effect over the two transcripts (showing connections and contrasts)? EVIDENCE: two or more quotes that connect or contrast analysed closely using terminology EXPLANATION: why might this be the case in the light of theories and context (GRAPE)?
A couple of accuracy issues to work on - people use 'could of' because it sounds like 'could've' which is short for 'could have' so you need to use 'could have', 'would have' etc. When you are using a possessive apostrophe on a plural that is formed by adding the suffix s, you need to put the apostrophe afterwards e.g. adults' speech = the speech of adults.
Try and be more tentative about what you can tell from a short amount of data and quantified analysis. Basically, nothing proves anything so don't definitively say anything is supported or contradicted except to a degree by the data, given its limitations.